AP Research- Peer Editing

[Ms. Miller, MAED & MA]

Post the research question below. Skip a few lines and provide feedback based on the application of the three videos. Provide suggestions of how the question can be improved.Please do not include the name of the student.

[Jiho Kim]

Q: How do fearless and regular people respond to horror and psychological horror differently, current and after?

What is considered a “regular person”? Perhaps provide a narrower demographic that specifically differentiates the two groups.

Horror and psychological Horror should be differentiated as well.

“Respond” should be specified as to what means an individual may respond with. (emotionally, physically, etc.)

[Adrian Sollom]

“Considering the increasing Chinese immigrants in the U.S after Covid 19 how does the immigrating pattern effect the mental health and social behavior at those Chinese immigrant students”

- Clarify language - “immigrating pattern” … “at those” replace with immigration and toward
- make narrower - mental health vs social behavior. Maybe choose one or talk about social behaviors toward the students and the students mental health as a cause of that behavior?
- 😁 good research question 😁🤙😀☺️🤗🤪😃😆

[jesslyn]

Q: how has the film industry and media perceptions created misconceptions on the behaviors of serial killers?

maybe clarify what "the behaviors of serial killers" entails

[Rosabel Tan]

"How do specific nutrients in food influence the production of neurotransmitter assisted with happiness in the brain?"
This research question lacks context. To fix this issue, I would suggest adding a specific population, time, and place that this student's topic is interested. This way, the student will also have some direction in where their research gap is. Additionally, with more research, the student could specify with "specific nutrients on food" that they aim to study in order to narrow their scope.

[Chloe Lee]

"How accurate and precise is the process of organ donation and recovery in teaching hospitals in the US, according to the TV show Grey's Anatomy?"


The question overall is almost perfect,but you could specify what type of organ donations in the US.

[Tyler Kung]

Q: Within modern American cinema, what elements define the generational appeal of the "action" film genre?

Have more clarity by highlighting the types of elements being analyzed

[Lien Cheng]

To what extent has the effect of ambiguity on people led to anxiety and other mental health issues in the 21st century in Generation Z in America?

Population: Generation Z
Geographic location: America
Time: 21st century
Type: ambiguity (vague, specify ambiguity in terms of what situation)
Situation: health issues

[Violet Maraj]

Q: How do specific nutrients in food influence the production of neurotransmitter assisted with happiness in the brain?

Specify the types of food that could be assisting the happiness in the brain.
Then choose nutrients that is in that food.

[Avery Chang]

Q: How does the portrayal of love in romance movies affect the perception of love in real life relationships?

There are a lot of romance movies that have been made over time, so it might be easier to narrow to a specific decade or era of romance movies.

You also might want to narrow to a specific location, like the US, and a specific age group such as teens.

[Joshua Ouyang]

Q: To what extent does school impact the mental health of students who strive on academic validation.

You might want to specify which aspect of mental health.

[may]

To what extent did the covid-19 pandemic alter the mental health of nursing professionals in california?

feedback: specify which part of California unless you have access to nursing professionals all over the state

[xxxxp5]

To what extend has the effect of ambiguity on people lead to anxiety and other mental health issues in the 21st century in generation Z in America

What type of ambiguity are you taking about, what other ideas/interpretations are you being opened to, like for example what situations are you being ambiguious in

[Avery Rose]

What are the impacts of social media fashion trends, specifically the impacts of the brand Brandy Melville, on the female adolescents perception of self body image?

Make sure to remember to narrow or specify what types of social media fashion trends, and maybe specify location if possible.

[Jake Djohan]

Q: How does the mental health stigma in ___ impact nursing students perspectives on patient care in comparison to other nursing students and licensed nurses in ___ and globally?

Maybe specify only nursing students to licensed nurses.
Maybe instead of globally, focus on a specific region.